thunder in trouble

thunder didnt know what it was, but it was big and it was very mean. he galoped and galoped not knowing where he was going.
first it was far away then it was near, too colse. it was in the bushes then it sprang. he dared to look back and saw glowing amber eyes.
he was scared, usualy he just dived in not thinking about being scared. Jewel pulled up next to him. "now what trouble shall become of this place O
great trouble inducer." she said. thunder kept going. "why dont we get away then you may be sarcastic o wise one." she was not shure what to say.
"what is chaseing us?" she asked fearfuly. "i realy am not shure he said trying to sound calm.

A pheonix flew right by the, its tail feathers almost hitting the horses," Charge!"

"hia" jewel said "what?who?when?"thunder said.

Crystal leaped onto the things back,snarling, and angel was in step with them. crystal jumped onto her back, turing and snarling at the monster. "Why are we running instead of fighting?" she asked,

The pheinix turns, blinking its gold eyes," Huh? I thought you guys were that terrible beast" in a honey like voice

A few teenage panthers poked their head out of the forest

Red SkyKite turned to them," sorry guys, im sorry for your home"

Crystal batted at it, hissing. "h, your smart, arent you." se hissed, her green eyes slits, claws unsheathed. "crystal!" angel called, stopping dead. crystal hurled herself at the beast perfectly, taking it by surprise as angel spun to join her. They obviosly were very proffesioned in fighting togeter, silently pulling off almost impossible battle moves as one.

(????? gunna try to answer)

red Skykie took off, a trail of smoke following his wake," Fools!" he cries in a fierce voice

The young panthers in the forest all bared their teeth. eyes flashing and new adult teeth glinting

Crystal barely blinks, as shestood on angels head between her ears, and scrapes her claws over the monsters snout, while angel bit its ear hard, black blood spurting. they pulled off more combos, and angel cried, "Thunder, why?!?!"

(COnfusion!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????)

(lol, im a confusing person!=P y r u confused?)

( dunno getting more sonfused)

(they r fightin a monster)
Shadow kicked it, so it stumbled backwards, and crystal stood, snarling.

"why,my idiot friend, do you ALWAYS get in such trouble??" jewel said and reared at the evil thing (im not sure what it is yet ill think on that)
it was strong, very it tryed to bite her but she leaped back in time.

Crystal bit its leg, and black blood squirted out. She leaped onto angels back, using it as a springboard to leap onto the creature, snarling.

Thunder pinned his ears and lunged at the evil creature. " holy krap!" he exclaimed as it visocusly lunged at him. " do we agree that it kinda needs to go for it does something terrable??" jewel asked as she leaped away as the creature tryed to attac her.

Crysta; rode ir like a bucking bronco, biting into the back of its neck, until it threw her. She landed in a tree, and leaped onto angels back gently, as she reared up, striking out.

jewel thought the thing was truly hidious. teako went to help crystal, leaping at the creatures throat, slashing at it with hia claws. the monster reached down and tryed to eat him its razor sharp and rather jaged teeth seemed to spin in its mouth. "oh.my.gosh." teako said, as though offended.

Crystal couldnt help but laugh, and she darted under the monster, slashing its belly.

Teako mirrord Jewels look of astonishment as it went into a sunny patch where they saw what it looked like much better. it was almost like a dragon.
it was black,everything on it was, and it was ugly, ugly didnt even begin to describe it. Jewel lept up at it before it could have a chance to react. She slashed and kicked and bit at it in a flurry. Teako joined in and scraped his claws against its stumace and what ever he could do to try and kill it.

Crystal leaped onto its back, biting into the back of the neck. Angel distracted it, and crystal reached her paw around and tore open it throat, black blood gushing from the deep wound.

Teako and Holly ran up the creature, taking this oportunity to slash its eyes, scraping and clawing at it till it was blinded. suddenly it started throwing its head back and forth. it make lots of high pitch screeching sounds as it went crashing to the ground. its mighty body making a hugh thud when it hit the ground. Thunder looked at it and finaly said, " whell... glad thats over!" Jewel looked at him and said, "ok start talkin mister." Thunder looked at her and replyed "huh? what you mean?" Jewel glared at him and he finaly relented " all i know is it was chaseing me and it did not seem very happy." Jewel stared at him and said "oh? and why might that be???"

angel frowned, looking down at the creature, while crystal sat on top of it, watching thunder and jewel.

teako stared at thunder and jewel ranting on about the dead monster thingy. her looked at Holly quizikly. "i havent a clue" Holly said seeing his questioning look.

Crystal leaped over to sit with them, watching thunder and jewel with some interest. Angel watched them too.

Finaly Jewel pinned her ears at Thunder and nipped him, " I have no idea what you think you were doing but me and the others would appriciate it if you wouldnt show anymore monsters where we live, i think one was good enought and i dont plan on fighting another one" Thunder watched her without bothering to listen as she yelled at him. "can i go yet?" he asked boredly. "Okay, but i swear ill leave you to die iff another one follows you here."
thunder mearly noded as he gallpoed away with Holly at his heals.